Structure our writing with on introduction and topic sentence

WALT:Structure our writing with on introduction and topic sentence


I learnt about sustainability it was easy because i did it in a group and my teacher sally helped me.

this is my plan

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WALT: Making on INFORMATIVE diagram.

I learned about all of the four parts of the water cycle. It was kind of easy because there were heaps of pictures to look at.

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Writing

WALT:Use details to support our main ideas.

First we read the book then we planed and we wrote about what are doing.And I learn about to keep trees.

I learnt that cutting down trees is a bad idea.And the easy thing was planning my writing the hard thing was trying to make in interesting.

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Writing

WALT:About Forces.

We watched videos,we talked and made air planes

I learn that motion=movement and that balance=no motion.
The hardest part for me was writing because i just started  so i didn't know what to do what not to do

The easiest part was making the air plane because i already knew how to
The next time i do a blog i will put more detail in to the next one

Here is a link to a video that helped me.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ol03h95iZd4