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Friday 24 November 2017

Writing

WALT:Writing

                           
Steps I took
1.I took the steps that where in my green book
2.What was hard/easy
Some of it was hard because I had to do it by myself
Some was easy because I got help we have a plan that we follow
3.What I learnt
I learnt to take steps
4.DLO

PLEASE WRITE A POSITIVE,KIND AND HELPFUL COMMENT.

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  1. Anonymous26 November 2017 at 11:40

    Kia Ora Te Rina,
    I am so proud of you for writing something so personal and from the heart. I bet your Matua and Whaea miss you too! Sound like you had a good time at the pools! I miss my brother too, he lives in different country which is really hard for us sometimes as well.

    I was really impressed with your writing style as well, you used paragraphs to group your ideas and topic sentences to make it easy for the reader to follow along.

    Ka mau te wehi, kōtiro!

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