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Tuesday, 25 July 2017

Write a letter using a character description


WALT: Write a letter using a character description.
What step i took i took step by step
i learnt to be a character and i learnt to write more
it was easy because i did my plan
it was hard because i had to add more words
                                   This is my plan that i used for my plan









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2 comments:

  1. Gretchen25 July 2017 at 22:12

    Hi Te Rina, I enjoyed reading your letter from Nga Whetu. It was interesting to read as you added lots of description and I could imagine what it was like for Nga Whetu up in the dark sky - seems so lonely! It's great that your plan made it easy for you to write this. Keep up the good work :)

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  2. Anonymous26 July 2017 at 18:36

    Hi Te Rina,
    I was really impressed with the quality of this piece of work. Gretchen is right, it's easy to imagine things because you give us such rich descriptions. You really show lots of character voice as well and I feel as though I can hear the character talking.

    Well Done.

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